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Cenim si kazdy komentar, pokial nie je vyslovene urazlivy.]]> http://www.xbdsm.sk/comment/view/id_75364/ Tue, 15 Dec 2015 09:35:01 +0000 Zazitko http://www.xbdsm.sk/comment/view/id_75360/ ako som uz napisal, je to snaha o nejake literarne dielo - asi mini roman, kedze to ma uz niekolko kapitol. Svoj nazor k stylu pisania som autorovi napisal pri inej casti. Tu som napisal, ze by bolo fajn to pred publikovanim aj skontrolovat. Myslim, ze Zazitko tu ma dost slusny fan-klub, takze by mu to mal kto urobit . Ani autorovi predpokladam nejde o priemernost.

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Clovek musi najprv nieco napisat, aby mohol vyjadrit svoj nazor? Ved kazdy kto nieco hocikde publikuje musi pocitat s tym, ze mu to ludia budu aj komentovat. Alebo sa akceptuje len potlapkanie po pleci a veta: "Bolo to skvele ......" ?]]> http://www.xbdsm.sk/comment/view/id_75360/ Tue, 15 Dec 2015 08:13:09 +0000 Mastterr http://www.xbdsm.sk/comment/view/id_75354/ http://www.xbdsm.sk/comment/view/id_75354/ Mon, 14 Dec 2015 23:49:35 +0000 MissGasoline http://www.xbdsm.sk/comment/view/id_75353/ http://www.xbdsm.sk/comment/view/id_75353/ Mon, 14 Dec 2015 23:39:34 +0000 Zazitko http://www.xbdsm.sk/comment/view/id_75352/ http://www.xbdsm.sk/comment/view/id_75352/ Mon, 14 Dec 2015 23:25:02 +0000 Zazitko http://www.xbdsm.sk/comment/view/id_75348/ http://www.xbdsm.sk/comment/view/id_75348/ Mon, 14 Dec 2015 21:34:17 +0000 lara http://www.xbdsm.sk/comment/view/id_75329/ http://www.xbdsm.sk/comment/view/id_75329/ Mon, 14 Dec 2015 12:48:20 +0000 Mastterr